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Apr 19, 2017AlteredStaite rated this title 2 out of 5 stars
Every time something started to happen....it fizzled out..... and left the reader hanging. The "Swamp Angel" title was based on an object which appeared to be irrelevant to everything that didn't happen. The actually 'writing' itself drove me crazy. A lot of sentences/thoughts appeared to come out of nowhere .... thoughts were left hanging and/or incomplete and also often off topic to what was currently happening. Perhaps it wasn't meant to be a story that has a beginning and end....it was just a series of rambling incidents that never ended. It was like listening to someone who's stoned on pot try to tell you something that happened to them ... the prose would wander back and forth and there as no structure or meaning to anything